There's one thing that it needs
It is a good art. Pretty funny However, there's something that should have been added imperatively and forgot to add: a nosebleed. If that green-haired black guy had his nose blrrding from looking at her, it would have been epic, but now he's just blushing, so it doesn't have much «punch»
Emily's just eating ice cream with her bewbs.... she's nawt nekkid. This sittuation does not warrant a nosebleed......yet.
I am a Zombie-Shooter and FPS fan, though my favourite videogame series is pokémon. I've got a lot of creativity so if you need a story-writter just ask me! My favourite pokémon is Blaziken
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